Writing

Hello everyone,

Welcome back to my blog today I am going to showing you my writing for this week. This story is about a thunder night. Hope you will like it. We are learning to use my six senses to describe my writing and to use strong ideas when writing.
Here it is 

Writing Prompt

One cold night I was trying to finish some homework as I began to
finish, ‘I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky like lightning.
Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black like at
night time outside…’ I tried to find my phone I checked everywhere
but still couldn’t see my phone or feel it, I remembered that I left it in
the table. 

I could feel the couch as I go past, I could feel my rusty wooden table
where I remembered that I left my phone. As I began to get closer
I could hear my phone explode with text message as I slowly walked
by.I checked my phone to see any massage. As I touch my phone
I feel the heat, I feel like It’s going to explode even more. 

I was hesitant trying to figure out what to do next with myself in the
pitch black with no internet. I could hear the thunder crashing the
clouds like people fighting. I tried to stay chilled in my couch, but it
keeps coming and coming. I was forbidden to go outside to check if
anything was happening outside.

 I began to be hungry and I wanted to have something hot, but when
I began to go I release that I there wasn't any electricity so I couldn’t
have any hot Milo or any coffee. I had some could milk instead.
I could taste the coldness of the milk, it feels like really could water.

After about an hour, I could hear the trees feeling down but luckily
it was not close to my house. The thunderstorm was maybe the
worst ever Thunderstorm in our town. I could bits of leafs going around “puff puff” as they go past My house.

I felt a bit scared that something is going to happen to me.
Later on the night the storm started to stop but the rain was
keeping and hail. 

Thank you for reading, looking forward for you comments