Hotspot Writing Term 4

Hello Again,

Welcome back to my blog today's blog is going to be about my writing.

We are learning to write in past-progressive tense, use powerful action verbs and only include what is powerful, meaningful and important. 

“No, no, no!” I was sliding back into the dream. I kept screaming “Ahhhh”
I was trying not to think of Monsters. Walking to the kitchen to get a drink of water,
I heard a loud noise “BANG BANG”!!! I walked to the door to look outside and
heard someone screaming”AHHHH” I was getting worried that something
dangerous was happening outside. So I Tumbling back into my room and
on the light and on the creaky ground there was a thumping noise outside
“Thump thump thud” I checked If there was something outside, looked under
my bed for anything, I put my hand under to check if there was something
and there was big spooky spikey long un usley thing. I went to get a flashlight
to see what is under my bed, I found the flashlight full of red stuff on the
flashlight and it was coming out from my hand was blood. I was hearing
grasping noise coming underneath my bed I checked again and saw two
beating eyes looking towards me trying to get closer to me.

Thank you for reading hoped you liked my writing and i know that there might be some mistake. Looking forward to your comments.