Easttle Writing

Talafo Everyone,

Welcome back to my blog I'm go to be showing you my Easttle writing. We had 45 minutes and had to write down a story.

It was a hot sunny day in Australia like always and all the kids were running around the pools and splashing people. This water park was the biggest water park in Australia so lots of kids wanted to go there.

 They were a big huge water slide and all the kids wanted to go there but only 9 up to 19 were only allowed to go on that slide, so all the kids were a little bit angry about cause all the kids wanted to go on there.

There was a jumping pool were its was only allowed for 5 years old and up only bit the little ones were scared to go on it. There was a really small one where little kids could go on, a medium on where kids that were too scared to go on the big one.

There was a baby playground for little kids that don’t really want to go on the big pools.

Lots of little kids would fight who goes done first but luckily there were parents to see what they were doing.

The water sound like the sea splashing through the sand like the waterfall. The sound of the kids was giving me a headache there sound like birds wanting food from their parents.

 Thank you for reading hoped you like it looking forward to your comments and questions. Good bye